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Taught nothing but to hate themselves-selve-selves,
Each day.
Hi-ding in tales of knights of elves, elves-elves,
Can't stay.
Deep into them hatred it delves, delves-delves...
They pay...
Their only respite is a blade, blade-blade,
So blunt,
They feel their life, away it fade, fade-fades,
They hunt,
For punishment, their debt is paid, paid-paid,
In blood...
Cutting-deep into their flesh, flesh-flesh,
Red stain.
Their bodies no more than a mesh, mesh-mesh,
Of pain.
A childhood alone in a creche, creche-creche,
No gain.
Concealing darkness deep inside, side-side,
Their heart..
The nightmares that they must abide, bide-bide,
They start.
Did they not try? Of course they tried! Tried-tried,
So hard.
There's no-one in whom to confide, fide-fide...
They're scarred.
No, they know that ev-ery-one lied, lied-lied...
They starred,
In their own obitu-a-ry, ry-ry,
They died.
No, please don't die you're scaring me, me-me,
I cried...
Why do they deserve this oh god, god-god,
The Lord.
Why were they considered so so odd, odd-odd,
Adored,
By no-one, they were so downtrod-trod-trod,
Blood poured.
What can they do but simply hate, hate-hate,
Themselves...
Life given to them, cruel fate, fate-fate,
Is Hell...
Each day.
Hi-ding in tales of knights of elves, elves-elves,
Can't stay.
Deep into them hatred it delves, delves-delves...
They pay...
Their only respite is a blade, blade-blade,
So blunt,
They feel their life, away it fade, fade-fades,
They hunt,
For punishment, their debt is paid, paid-paid,
In blood...
Cutting-deep into their flesh, flesh-flesh,
Red stain.
Their bodies no more than a mesh, mesh-mesh,
Of pain.
A childhood alone in a creche, creche-creche,
No gain.
Concealing darkness deep inside, side-side,
Their heart..
The nightmares that they must abide, bide-bide,
They start.
Did they not try? Of course they tried! Tried-tried,
So hard.
There's no-one in whom to confide, fide-fide...
They're scarred.
No, they know that ev-ery-one lied, lied-lied...
They starred,
In their own obitu-a-ry, ry-ry,
They died.
No, please don't die you're scaring me, me-me,
I cried...
Why do they deserve this oh god, god-god,
The Lord.
Why were they considered so so odd, odd-odd,
Adored,
By no-one, they were so downtrod-trod-trod,
Blood poured.
What can they do but simply hate, hate-hate,
Themselves...
Life given to them, cruel fate, fate-fate,
Is Hell...
Regarding self hatred, self harm, crushed confidence, bullying and abuse.
More specifically, it's effect upon the vulnerable but wonderful among us who can be pushed into a fog of self hatred from which it can be near-impossible to escape.
Another dark but realistic poem, I hope it doesn't get you too depressed... *grins*
Enjoy.
- Jakk'
Note: I've never had any self confidence issues or experienced any wish to harm myself. This is poetry expressing a message, created as art. Not an attention seeker
More specifically, it's effect upon the vulnerable but wonderful among us who can be pushed into a fog of self hatred from which it can be near-impossible to escape.
Another dark but realistic poem, I hope it doesn't get you too depressed... *grins*
Enjoy.
- Jakk'
Note: I've never had any self confidence issues or experienced any wish to harm myself. This is poetry expressing a message, created as art. Not an attention seeker
© 2005 - 2024 Jakkar
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nice job
i like this piece
not sure about the echo effect... personally i don't think its necessary
i like this piece
not sure about the echo effect... personally i don't think its necessary